NOT+AGAIN,+DAD!+by+Thurley+Fowler

Lit Club Members: Emily Barke r, Tayla Jobe, Marcus Judd , Josh Nickleson , Leone Sevudredre

Who is the character? What have you learnt about them so far? Do you like/dislike this charcter? Why? //Choose a different character each. You can add or comment on each other's character profile once the first author has completed their thoughts!//** || He likes to win games and is very compeditive when playing sport. he can only cook 2 things that he leant when he was a kid in the scouts. dad thinks that he is a more importent person than any one and they should follow his rules at all time!!! dad loves his cricket and swimming. he is very lazy and makes his kids work and do all the jobs for him. || Paul loves his sport. he plays cricket and dose swimming. ||
 * || **Develop a character profile.
 * Emily || David is a person that is not use to being a father to two Kids.{Paul and Juliet are his kids!]
 * Tayla || Juliet is 8 years old she is pauls little sister she loves doing ballet and is alway is neat and tidy like her mum and very fashionable . ||
 * Marcus || Paul is the brother of julet and the son of david. He likes criket and swimming and he is a joker making jokes when it is a bad time. He dosnt want to have bad reputaion because of his dad.
 * Josh ||  ||
 * Leone || Beth, is the mothe of Juliet and Paul and is on a bissnus trip for three weeks. ||

5th August 2009

I **am sensing you are not enjoying this text... What are some of the changes the author could make to make the book more interesting? Rewrite an event in the story to add some excitement.**
 * Emily || ||
 * Tayla || ||
 * Leone || ||
 * Marcus || he or she could make it more interesting and exiting ||
 * Josh || to have some thig more exiting in the book ||

